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  1. XxEmoannaxX avatar

    On Mon, Jan 9, 2012 at 8:06 AM, XxEmoannaxX said:

    oh thanx i thought you guys might like it. Anyways if you get confused let me kno

  2. Bogi EMS avatar

    On Tue, Dec 27, 2011 at 3:29 PM, Bogi EMS said:

    Nice story. Continue to write. This your story is great.

  3. XxEmoannaxX avatar

    On Tue, Dec 13, 2011 at 9:33 AM, XxEmoannaxX said:

    Okay fixed and you should be able to understand it now. I hope. If you don't tell me and i'll try to make it better

  4. XxEmoannaxX avatar

    On Mon, Dec 12, 2011 at 9:43 AM, XxEmoannaxX said:

    Yea umm i tried to fix that before i posted it give me a sec and it will be fixed and you will also read Episode 1 if you like i don't want to over whelm you

  5. MIA avatar

    On Fri, Dec 9, 2011 at 1:13 PM, MIA said:

    ok, enjoyed reading it???...well, not really, .....wrong wording. Enjoyed your writing.... no one likes to hear that kids are abused but you know what i mean. Enjoyed your writing..
    See...... i am no writer lol
    May the other one get adopted, With nice parents and in a few years the twins meet up together again. (i'm partial to twins being together lol as my twin and i are so scary alike and talk everyday)

  6. MIA avatar

    On Fri, Dec 9, 2011 at 12:39 PM, MIA said:

    hmm, not bad. I found it abit confusing...sorry it seemed rushed. All in one chapter, a lot happened. And i was confused with the ages. So Amillia was 13 when she was abused?
    "When Elizabeth was born started to hurt her, ten years later when Elizabeth was old enough their father started to rape and abuse her."
    It seemed like Elizabeth was 10 when he started abusing her yet Amillia was 13 when she noticed?

    "Amillia was stuck in the car Sherrie tried to get her out, but it was already too late the car exploded."
    So Amillia survived the bomb? didn't seem like she would as the car exploded.
    And me, being a twin,.. can't they get adopted together? :D (i know, i know, it's not how the story is going :D)
    How did they get the dad to stay inside? He tossed Amillia off him, So he'd be up, in time to get out of the house.

    i enjoyed reading it and ha, i am no writer so it could be me just confused. And glad XxEmo_PaganxX told you about this place....welcome :)